Content Writing for Medical Office Brochure

Public Clarification Board

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  gailwesterfield

  • 10 years ago

  Hi! You sent me a message about further work, but I can't find it anywhere on my messages, nor can I figure out how to communicate with you! Could you resend it through the Freelancer PM?

  • 10 years ago
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  stranger0090

  • 10 years ago

  Hello. Still waiting for the result :) have you selected?

  • 10 years ago
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  stranger0090

  • 10 years ago

  Have you seen all the entries? Mine is #2 . I did it and hopefully you will like my work. Thanks

  • 10 years ago
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  lzuccari

  • 10 years ago

  One issue for me was the fact that this will come from a medical office, and must inspire confidence in the reader. It needs to engage the reader and make them want to enroll in one of your plans, BUT it is essential that its tone is professional and medically reliable. If it reads like an infomercial, it is going to turn people off and make you sound like a huckster, instead of a medical professional who provides expert, clinically proven treatment as well as providing an extra measure of service, something that appeals to the patient's desire to be his/her own advocate. It's a bit tricky, not like writing copy to sell the latest "miraculous" diet supplement. That is why I chose to appeal to the patient's desire to be a "partner" with his doctor, still receiving reliable medical management of his health while maintaining an active role in his own regimen. Thanks for your input.

  • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  Some are ok though

  • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  I am looking at all of them. The problem is that I wanted to make things easy for me and choose the best one. For me to constantly give feedback and correct every one of 28 entries is a chore I am not willing to get into as it takes too much effort and the point was to make my life easier. Some are better some are not and will likely choose one soon, however I feel too many editors just changed the grammar and style and have been doing a poor copywriting job. In other words the text is correct but dull, and boring to read.

  • 10 years ago
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  SmaSimSolutions

  • 10 years ago

  hi calinvpop, please take a look at entry #27 .

  • 10 years ago
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  lzuccari

  • 10 years ago

  So, do I understand you to say that none of these entries are satisfactory for your purposes?

  • 10 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 10 years ago

  Let me be very clear here! This was a contest for COPYWRITERS, not for editors, proofreaders, freelancers, etc. The purpose is to be able to captivate, attract clients and make them ready to buy.
  Good wording and grammar are a good start but absolutely not enough.

  • 10 years ago
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  ezzhoda

  • 10 years ago

  Hello,
  
  I am really interested in the job. I've been working as a freelancer for over 5 years now and have done previous similar projects. Let me know when I can start.
  Looking forward to your reply :)
  
  
  Thanks,
  
  Hoda

  • 10 years ago
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  SmaSimSolutions

  • 10 years ago

  Hello, kindly review entry #27
  I have reduced the word count by 50 words, in order to fit into 1 page brochure. current word count is 450 from the original 500 odd words.i have used positive tone to present the content in users perspective. standard ezine guidelines were followed while working on this article. for any modifications, send me a private message. feel free to see my past work, 5 star rated award winning article on finance. https://www.freelancer.in/contest/Write-a-blog-on-finance-48978-byentry-2143729.html
  https://www.freelancer.in/contest/Write-a-blog-on-finance-48978-byentry-2143752.html

  • 10 years ago
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  pebblessantos

  • 10 years ago

  Why can't I submit my entry?

  • 10 years ago
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  rishini

  • 10 years ago

  can you provide us with more information about the services provided by these health care packages. The information provided in the article is very vague and not enough to arouse the interest of the reader and actually convince them to buy the product. So let us know, what is offered by each package?, what is the difference between these packages? and why should we buy it?

  • 10 years ago
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  stranger0090

  • 10 years ago

  Greetings, I am waiting for your decision. I have submitted the edited file. Thanks

  • 10 years ago
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  stranger0090

  • 10 years ago

  Waiting for your verdict. Thanks

  • 10 years ago
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  lzuccari

  • 10 years ago

  Done and submitted. Good luck finding your winner!!

  • 10 years ago
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  cattaaa

  • 10 years ago

  I should have a version available within 24 - 36 hours.

  • 10 years ago
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  stranger0090

  • 10 years ago

  Document Submitted. Waiting for your decision now. Thanks

  • 10 years ago
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  lzuccari

  • 10 years ago

  Just saw your contest and this is my speciality. I will post an entry tomorrow. Thanks, Luanne

  • 10 years ago
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  doru1961

  • 10 years ago

  Can I bid for this project?

  • 10 years ago
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  stranger0090

  • 10 years ago

  I am working on the doc. now. Thanks

  • 10 years ago

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