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"There are many significant professional and academic accomplishments that I feel proud of, nevertheless, there are some achievements that are accomplished automatically, for example, if you study hard you eventually obtain for example BA or MA in some subject – of course, this is a significant achievement, but it is a logical conclusion. However, I feel more proud about the achievements that I worked really hard on, that I strived for and achievements that require not only one course of action (like only studying) but also other aspects such as overall potential, past valuable experiences, knowledge, etc. One of those achievements was when in 2012, I was selected as a finalist of the NNF program, which is really hard to get and which is given not only because of your very high academic results, but also overall achievements as a student compared to other potential students. In this regard, I consider it one of my biggest achievements. The other one is the fact that I authored the first Serbian-Hungarian Phrase Book, at such young age. Authoring a book is an enormous accomplishment that is worth being proud of. "