I have a client with a promotional business letter that needs to be rewritten and edited. The letter is B2B and its purpose is to convince businesses to allow the client to come in and provide a demonstration of Martial Arts techniques and self defense.
The writing needs to be persuasive, very professional and free of grammatical errors and typos. Quick turn around is also a plus, US english please.
The drafted letter is currently 355 words and includes a brief bio on the client and some info on what he is offering. I have included a portion of the letter below. In choosing a writer for this project I need to know the complete cost, fixed rate please, turn around time and samples of your writing style.
HERE IS A SAMPLE TAKEN FROM THE LETTER:
The purpose for us reaching out to your organization is to offer our tailored service to you. I am a firm believer in helping people identify their personal road blocks in life, help them set goals and chart a course of result oriented success.
We are in the process of conducting a self defense clinic specifically tailored to females who are shy, who have been victims of physical and mental abuse, people who may suffer from low self esteem and confidence.
As seen by our representative and attached flyer, we will be covering the following:
Why they attack
Where the attack
What to use
Psychology of the attacker and you
Hands on Practice
Our goal is to empower our client not with violence, but with knowledge. My company would like to partner with your organization and help arm females a like with necessary mental tools to help prevent an attack or decrease the risk of injury and even death.
What I will offer to your organization is the following, 20% of the revenue generated at our clinic will be donated to your organization in an effort to help your organization further its cause.
Thanks for your time and looking forward to partnering with you. If you have questions, please contact me at
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