CopyWriter for a new service description needed

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dear freelancers,
i used a proffesional to create my investment document. the only problem now it that the section in the document where i describe my solution/service,the most important section in this whole document - not very good a clear,the language is pretty poor and with grammar mistakes. so what i would like you to do is to read the text,only about 300-400 words, understand the idea/concept behind it..and completly rewrite a new text which better describe my idea and in more depth..i want this section to have a wow factor..
the new text should be about 500-800 words.
I am ready to pay more to recieve the highest quality, so please take that in consideration(for example,investing double/triple time on it,etc)

ASAP - tight time considerations

Skills required:
Article Rewriting, Copywriting, Ghostwriting, Product Descriptions
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