Project Description:
Must Speak and Write in Native English
I am having a video animation made as we speak that the final product will be a 2.5 min video providing a summary of how I met my now girlfriend and our story as to how we came to be presently including at the end a proposal of engagement.
So where do you come in?
I have two documents now.
Document #1
In my words "A Love Story" that is several pages that I sent to the project leader where he went through it and picked particular points from the document to create the animation story. Now what I provided was not in story format it was like here is what happened and here is the order.
Document 2
He has since put together a rough narrative based on what I provided him ( most of his narrative is my own words from document 1) that outlined consecutive events of how I met my now girlfriend as he is going to lay it out in the animation.
What I need. I need you to read document 1 to understand the overall picture then read the proposed narrative. Then take the proposed narrative with you now knowing the "whole story" and re write it so it flows as a story but without changing the context. Of course you will proof read your own final work. The final product will be a narrative in beautiful story format and fitting for such a proposal.
Sample Narrative is attached
