Correction/rewrite of causal game intro text

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Project Description:
Hello everyone,

We are a small causal game studio and we would new to correct mistakes in our short intro text. But not only that. We need some native English speaker to rewrite this intro text something which will look more "professional " and actually like written by someone who is used to write fairytales etc. The text itself is very short, it is basically few sentences( you cant find the text in the attachment) .We need someone who will not only proofread and correct the mistakes in text but actually think about it and put some effort so it will look more fancy. Please also note that we don't want to make the text bigger, nothing like adding much more text, just rewrite it so the length will be approximately the same but the grammar and sentences will look like written by someone who know English language very well.

Note : The story should not be changed. A lot of references in text are actually present in game itself. So please don't change the story or places, actors etc..too much.

Additional Project Description:
02/20/2013 at 3:54 EST

Hello we are extending this project! We also need to have a voiceover of the rewritten text. We need someone with a audio equipment and experiences with Voice overs. So the project will be divided into two milestones. The review/rewrite/correction of a text itself and the voiceover of the text. Please see the new attachment. (Text.TXT) this is the most recent one. The output should be 20 mp3 files (each line should be read as a single file).

Skills required:
Article Rewriting, Audio Services, Ghostwriting, Proofreading, Voice Talent
Additional Files: intro.TXT Text.TXT
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