Review / advice for a french website which scarcely converts

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Project Description:
A french website which I let translate by a native french does not convert to the degree like the german language website with the same copy in german. I assume there must be an issue with the text itself. Perhaps the translation is not well done. I dont know since I do not speak french. So, ideally I would like to have it proofread by a native french with knowledge of direct marketing technics. The URL is [url removed, login to view]

Skills required:
French, Proofreading, Sales
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