BOOK (The Hardship of Life)

I wrote a book about my life story and I had some help with a friend of mine but I had to finish it my self. I do make a lot of mistakes. Sorry I have problems writing. But I found an ending to the story. And I would like it to be a little longer as well. But the problem is that I can’t afford thousands of dollars to get it fix. And I was hoping someone would give me a chance and look at the book and hope someone would be willing to help me with it. I will try to write a Synopsis to help.