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I replaced front cover's bottom with water, cut lotus image clean and clean black lines of lotus logo. City image's tone is adjusted, there is no triangle, same gradient radial on front cover. Waiting your feedback, open for changes.

Contest Entry #2 for Book Cover Design

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  • bentwich
    Contest Holder
    • 1 year ago

    There must be some gentle texture of some sort on the back cover, otherwise I think it is too 'simple'

    • 1 year ago
    1. askcdesign
      askcdesign
      • 1 year ago

      Okay, Im going to work on these

      • 1 year ago
  • bentwich
    Contest Holder
    • 1 year ago

    Regarding the ripple water: at the top part of it, perhaps the city should be a bit less transparent, because the top part of the ripple somehow has 'horizontal' strokes, that overcome the vertical splash of the city.

    • 1 year ago
  • bentwich
    Contest Holder
    • 1 year ago

    Very nice on the front end. By 'triangle' I mean that since the spine and back cover are solid color, then there is a sharp vertical line at the right edge of the spine, so that the top left and bottom left corners of the front cover are 'triangles' of near black. This is what needs to be fixed. Right now there is a good front cover, but it is disconnected from the spine and back. There should not be this 'sharp' line separating the front cover from the spine, and there should be some pattern on the back. Regarding the lotus logo - I don't see what you have done, I still see white on the outer edges of the black lines, and I still see black lines, the lines should be transparent so that the dark blue of the background will come through and all that is left of the lotus is ONLY the white leaves.

    • 1 year ago