after correction ,Please check it and give me your opinion.
ok few improvements needed
you need to add a slide at start " celebrate Mother's Day with Neo at Home" the text needs to be really eye catching and animated
you cant see the menu properly so you need to improve that and make it look nice
the text on 00:28 you need to move this text when they get rid of tomatoes and you have a clear board at 00:29. Again the text looks very unattractive please work on fonts
at 00:45 add another text
"with our 3 course traditional sunday lunch"
this will come after "treat your mother something special this mother's day"
remove address phone and email
"to book call now 01202 298350
I will send the correction very soon.
too bad, When you decide to win, then why are you working with me.
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