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after correction ,Please check it and give me your opinion.

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  • muhammadashraf93
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    ok few improvements needed

    you need to add a slide at start " celebrate Mother's Day with Neo at Home" the text needs to be really eye catching and animated

    you cant see the menu properly so you need to improve that and make it look nice

    the text on 00:28 you need to move this text when they get rid of tomatoes and you have a clear board at 00:29. Again the text looks very unattractive please work on fonts

    at 00:45 add another text
    "with our 3 course traditional sunday lunch"
    this will come after "treat your mother something special this mother's day"

    last slide:
    remove address phone and email

    add

    "to book call now 01202 298350

    • 2 months ago
    1. atikfozdar
      atikfozdar
      • 2 months ago

      I will send the correction very soon.

      • 2 months ago
    2. atikfozdar
      atikfozdar
      • 2 months ago

      too bad, When you decide to win, then why are you working with me.

      • 2 months ago