Hello, here could see my proposal.
I really like the way you start the video, I just think it's a little fast paced. Here is another video to look at https://prod-fsnetwp-cdn.fullscreen.net/wp-content/uploads/2014/05/home.mp4
If you can take out the titles that would be great, just video clips. and after the first half the clips get generic, maybe try to use some more unique and more visually appealing clips.
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