Hi Adrian. Thanks for another great set of designs. I love how you have blended the top of the photos up to the top of the image - very clever. I have a couple of changes to suggest...
Slide 1 - Can the word 'Commercial' be the same style as 'Glazing Solutions'
Slide 2 - Can the words 'Glazing Solutions' be the same style as Slide 1 (white with shadow)
Slide 3 - Can you change the second star point to have the word 'or' be on the first line (I think it will make the two lines of text be better spaced) - 'Beautiful Timber or' 'Aluminium Options'. Is it possible to blend the dark grey colour of the wall up. The other slides do not have a break in the colour and I think it will be more consistant with the look of the other slides.
Slide 4 - PERFECT!!