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Character design

Hello, here are the improvements that were mentioned about the characters.


                                                                                                            Contest Entry #                                        14
                                     for                                         Draw us 7 black pen line characters

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  • vw7966577vw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    2021-05-14 ADDING A NEW NOTE: Try to make the characters faces not look so much westerner (except for Pete) Most of our viewer will be Asians, but some from the rest of the world too.

    • 2 months ago
  • vw7966577vw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    Pete is still too skinny
    Boss should not have a hat and the clock.
    Farm owner is better. Make the pant legs folded above the boots and make them even more worn/dirty. Remove the beard.
    Rest Owner: Move down his mouth little.
    Guest: he should just chew on something tough. The food is in his mouth = No need the steak
    Tired farmer's clothing needs to be more worn and dirty.
    I like the crab, Can you draw it from little more in a isometric view? I still want to see it in the box. Look at entry #15 for ideas

    I still think they all look to much like westerners (except for Pete). Maybe make them look Indian/Asian looking :-)

    • 2 months ago