Freelancer: jediahbillones
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Let me know if these faces are closer to what you need. Revisions: 1) Guest - expression made to look bothered, hand gesture raised and rested on the table 2) Farmer - made the hat wider and made the clothing look more worn 3) Crab - improved the box to be closer to the reference image 4) Farm owner - now holding a big sack of money and made the clothing look more worn

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  • vw7966577vw
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    • 2 months ago

    This is really good. But a few comments though:
    * The Boss should look older as he loks almost like child, and his face looks the same as the restaurant owner. Give him a more senior face and hair style. The "YOU" should be "hovering" sign/rectangular talk-bubble with an arrow pointing down to his head
    * Restaurant owner should have a waiter clothing or a chef style jacket.
    I don't like there's noses. Can you try some different noses, little different nose on all individuals (except Pete).
    * Pete's right side mustache looks too short.
    The guests hand look like he is gay. I think it needs to be angles forward little, and spread the fingers ;-)

    • 2 months ago