Public Clarification Board

  • agungwan5
    agungwan5
    • 2 months ago

    can you give a tag that must be revised?
    Thank you

    • 2 months ago
  • agungwan5
    agungwan5
    • 2 months ago

    Thank you for the rating... I will submit later with new revision

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    When can you have the revision--possible to expedite for in the next few hours--I would like to use at a meeting today that happens in 6 hours? Please advise...thanks!

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    I think your concept is the right balance of professionalism and edgy for our target stakeholders--school district executives and Human Resource Managers for Corporations

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    I think we should also work in the address of the company in the margins--maybe just Washington, DC or something if the actual address is too long

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    I really like the digital circuitry that included in the background to reinforce the brand--just a bit more here. Digital Network Group is about bringing organizations and people together--connecting them to accomplish large scale change that benefits everyone at reduced costs. I also think the scientific molecular structure and networking structures work well to help depict this (as the "nodes" represent organizations--logistics also works like this which is where much of our consulting recommendations are based upon)

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    for the youth/workforce/economic deveopment....area--your image is very good so the words are a bit redundant--you can keep the icons if you like as a way to refer back to them later in the presentation--but they also may not be necessary (more of a design decision)

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    The project concern + sports +...under the founder is meant to be reflective of the "reverse engineering" concept on page 4 (the point is that the founder had this experience and it will work for others)--hopefully this "chain" of activities can be showcased in a more creative manner

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    I like this concept...how you've placed the logo (the intention with the logo is tha the mark can be separated from teh words---so you can simply use the little guy running in the margins near the page #'s for example and use just the name in some locations as well. The images are reflective of diversity for young adults--please include young people as well--5-16 in your images too to be representative of customers and older professionals--30-50 to reflect the consultants that work for me (generally around the work we're doing or the divider slides if appropriate)

    • 2 months ago

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