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  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    good approach but again the imagery is the focus vs. the content...

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    this is a great image but the text gets lost in the imagery--can it be made more pronounced

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    the template looks disjointed --

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    really like this background slide--effective approach to timeline

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    The top of the two columns above the line are categories--see comments to other developer--

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    good pix but the kids look older than k12--who graduate at 18? maybe a range of kids or 1 kid that gets older...? i'm not sure--this might be workable...text seems too small

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    i think this is the same as the slide b4?

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    the slide b4 this and this one should be connected--we're talking about employers as an industry...the image is good I think

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    I like this imagery--the content is a little hard to read so maybe lighten the tint a bit so the words are more prominent--they als appear too small--but the background is very good

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    see comment to other developer on this slide

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    see my comments to other developer on this slide

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    good slide...effective

    • 2 months ago
  • dngvw
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    I don't like the white guy on the front to represent my firm--also the way the log is small in comparison (makes us look small)

    • 2 months ago
    1. dngvw
      Contest Holder
      • 2 months ago

      I like how the log is blended into the back on the agenda slide and the aporach...I also like the image on the DNG slide--but please see my comments to the other developer about the content...

      • 2 months ago

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