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EcIDstation- Persuasive News Article

Hello Contest Holder, We wrote this entry with a soul of a news article writer. Do let us know if you'd like to see any changes— either in tone or content. We removed our earlier entry because of a little editing and hope that you enjoy the read. Our Best Regards, M. & Zin.

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  • MehrZai
    MehrZai
    • 2 months ago

    We'll be looking forward for you response. Have a great day!

    • 2 months ago
  • MehrZai
    MehrZai
    • 2 months ago

    My name is Mehr. I am the writer in our team, and I've made a few changes to the document— the tone and the perception, both.

    • 2 months ago
  • MehrZai
    MehrZai
    • 2 months ago

    Thank you for the rating! The feedback was really appreciated. ^^

    • 2 months ago
  • GraphiCoreLLC
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    A stable income job may work for some, but it does not guarantee stability and the uncertainty of not knowing if you will stay long or grow, may many people think on having their own separate source of income. Also, what about the ones that struggle finding a steady employment???

    • 2 months ago
  • GraphiCoreLLC
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    In some areas it triggers the reader to look or stay with a "Stable" job, thus creating the perception that entrepreneurship is too risky.

    • 2 months ago
  • GraphiCoreLLC
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    Overall is good work. :)

    • 2 months ago
  • GraphiCoreLLC
    Contest Holder
    • 2 months ago

    I like it and has a lot of good points but still has some variances on writing styles that will need to be ironed.

    • 2 months ago

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