Pages UI/UX Design
I tried to focus more and more on content while keeping in mind the flat design instructions by you. In case the content is not clear in the submissions, please use this link for fullres view: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/dvbx17tmfsn6x3g/7sW7GrWi2l Please let me know your thoughts.
Public Clarification Board
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Contest Holder - 10 years ago
best to read these messages from bottom up...
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eleopardstudios
- 10 years ago
Hi, thanks a lot for the feedback. I am on it :)
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Contest Holder - 10 years ago
Pricing Options
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We won't have that many options. Please make it only 3 options. Make these colour named: Bronze, Silver, Gold.
The partial hero image doesn't work on this page. Either make it full screen with overlay or drop it completely.- 10 years ago
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Contest Holder - 10 years ago
Features
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Again we will want to replace the images in the pc screen, but for now that is fine.
Same feedback on header/hero image and footer.
The bottom sales message needs a little work. It feels disjointed as a statement and at first glance you can't tell the Sign up now is part of the sentence at all. I would get the button attached to the rest of the setence and get the font size more similar to make it feel more attached.
The following requirements directly from the spec haven't been done:
Prominent "Sign up Now", and "Pricing Options" buttons top and bottom
List of features organised into groups - "More Bookings/More Money", "Less Admin, More Free Time", "More Control"
We envisage each feature to be in fairly large font, but with a more info link and the whole feature clickable to expand into a larger section of text on the feature.- 10 years ago
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Contest Holder - 10 years ago
The image of the computer screen with the software running is good. We will want to put other images in the screen later but this is good as a proof of design for now. However we need to show it will work on a tablet just as well as a mac or PC - could we do a version with an iPad/tablet in it too (and we would alternate the images on a schedule in the actual page)?
You have missed a major element we wanted as the most prominent thing on this page (see the spec for more info) - this is the formula discussed. Some sort of clear visual for this is important. I sums up everything nicely.
Remove the features at the glance from this page. In the section operating software for Activity and Tour Operators - add the Browser all features button.
Remove the see our system live in action, and fully dynamic interactive dashboard.
Footer
- Missing Social media icons/links
- Missing visual work up of how the EU Cookie Law warning (pop-up?) would be presented.- 10 years ago
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Contest Holder - 10 years ago
Homepage
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The hero/background image needs to be more clear. I would prefer to put an overlay with opacity set rather than blur the image as has appeared to be done in the examples. There will be a series of hero images with different colours so it is important it works with other images. The idea of the hero image is to show the types of activities covered by the software - therefore the images need to be clean and clear.
The Wulaka logo might still need some more refinement (just cleaning it a bit) but its use is as we intended it (I am not sure if this is just because the screenshot was saved down as a JPG or not - maybe just send a closer up version of this header so I can check it?).- 10 years ago
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Contest Holder - 10 years ago
Hi,
Thanks again for your entry. It is a good start. Here is my feedback, long but not massive in terms of changes (this has to be broken into mulitple messages because I can only post small messages at a time:- 10 years ago
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Contest Holder - 10 years ago
Hi. Thank you for your entry. I think this is a good start. I will attach feedback shortly.
- 10 years ago
