Freelancer: Trimid
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The Third Half - Redesigned Presentation Version

Hello, I've attached the re-designed version (preview) of your original slide design. Kindly refer the attached description sheet as well for details of the work done on the file. I hope you like my design. I am available to discuss further. I hope my work is good enough to be adjudged the winner of this contest. Thank you.

                                                                                                            Contest Entry #                                        14
                                     for                                         Pitch-kit design

Public Clarification Board

  • clbrecker
    Contest Holder
    • 3 years ago

    As I mentioned in the on-line chat , my team really likes your work. I would like to make a few minor edits - " A new social movement helping (add this word to all slides)/ Also we would like to drop the word "depression" out of page 2 and just use anxiety and isolation. I really like the layout of your graphics - but the team would like to see a little more white space and slightly more subdued...would it be possible to reduce the size of some of the graphics a little bit (or tone down the vividness) for pages (2-4)? For example - the word THRIVE really pops which is great- but it does take overtake the the image is so becomes a lot of competition for the eye on that page....(which is a little bit the case for page 3). Not too much to tinker with so appreciate your thoughts. thank you.

    • 3 years ago
    1. Trimid
      • 3 years ago

      Have sent you the revised version of the file over the on-line chat box. Kindly have a look and let me know if the design now suits your requirements. Thank you.

      • 3 years ago