Hi Michelle, I like the layout in thirds and I like the transparent banner over the left hand photo. I also like the way you have picked out a gold colour from the graphic and used it for the left hand banner. I think you have too many fonts going on here and the centralising of the main column on the right hand page feels a little awkward. But overall this is a strong entry. Very well done!
By the way, I just wanted to mention that the color looks a little bit different in the submission (it is less neon looking in my original file) because freelancer displays lower quality files during the contest.