Design a logo for an online website teaching Arabic 'Arabic Train'

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  BrainJR

  • 9 years ago

  hi , how can i make #44 better ?
  any tips ? :3

  • 9 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 9 years ago

     Hi brain JR definitely getting closer to what I want. I love the colours and how they merge into each other. Hopefully this will be the last request can you please put a line above each carraiage and also instead of using letters to change the first carraige can you you use an actual trainagle at the front and a rectangle for the chimney. Refer to 37 and 80 please. Thank you

     • 9 years ago
  2. 

     BrainJR

     • 9 years ago

     Done, The design #93 ..
     how about now ? :3
     Hope you like it ^^ !

     • 9 years ago
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  shobbypillai

  • 9 years ago

  plz check #80 thanks

  • 9 years ago
  1. 
     Contest Holder

     • 9 years ago

     Hi thanks for the entry the train is good but I got some feedback that the font is not easy to read. The font on 44 and 37 is more readable. Thanks again

     • 9 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 9 years ago

  Hi guys just not much time left. I like alot of the logos submitted but still not exactly what im after. I am willing to give a bonus $20 if i get a design I am very happy with. To make it easy for you I like the font on #44 and #37 but the i should have the hamzah as a dot (refer to #44 ). I like bright colours like #75 . I like the concept on #44 with the letters making up the train (just change the shape of the first carriage, i feel it looks like a shoe).
  
  Another concept I like is to have the letter A in the shape of a train head on like #4 . so the letter A in the word Arabic will look like the front of a train. to give a negative space logo (can do a search on google if your not familiar with it)
  
  I am willing to extend the contest if need be. just comment below if you need more time.
  
  Thanks for your time

  • 9 years ago
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  shobbypillai

  • 9 years ago

  https://www.google.co.in/search?hl=en&site=imghp&tbm=isch&source=hp&biw=1440&bih=785&q=train&oq=train&gs_l=img.3..0l10.993.2477.0.3086.5.5.0.0.0.0.170.744.0j5.5.0....0...1ac.1.32.img..0.5.743.hnOeiHXh-3g#hl=en&q=train&tbm=isch&tbs=itp:clipart&facrc=_&imgdii=_&imgrc=-NNo5JCbTI9NIM%253A%3B-yiQ9lHJV8Ns1M%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.clipartsfree.net%252Fvector%252Flarge%252FBlue_Train_Vector_Clipart.png%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.clipartsfree.net%252Fclipart%252F20644-walking-to-the-train-clipart.html%3B900%3B294

  • 9 years ago
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     pratikdas90

     • 9 years ago

     http://www.clipartlord.com/free-cartoon-blue-train-clip-art/
     Go through the link where it says "can be used for commercial or personal use". So mind your own buisness.

     • 9 years ago
  2. 
     Contest Holder

     • 9 years ago

     Hi guys please no disputes on my page. Its all good. Ive mentioned below which ideas I like if they could be put together some how would be great

     • 9 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 9 years ago

  There are few entries that I really like. I like the choice of colours #75 . Th font on #37 , #44 , #55 especially the use of the hamzah instead of the dot on #44 . Also the use of the arabic letters to make up the train carraige on #44 is clever (just didnt like the shape of the first carriage). I also like the concept used # 62 to have the train outline above and using the dots from the letters as part of the wheels. Thank you to all the entries only one day left to submit your final entries

  • 9 years ago
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  shobbypillai

  • 9 years ago

  Hi, #58 is a copy https://www.google.co.in/search?hl=en&site=imghp&tbm=isch&source=hp&biw=1440&bih=785&q=train&oq=train&gs_l=img.3..0l10.993.2477.0.3086.5.5.0.0.0.0.170.744.0j5.5.0....0...1ac.1.32.img..0.5.743.hnOeiHXh-3g#hl=en&q=train&tbm=isch&tbs=itp:clipart

  • 9 years ago
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  mghoneimy

  • 9 years ago

  Interesting contest. Am ready to participate. It would probably be a good idea to seal the entries. Thanks.

  • 9 years ago
  1. 
     Contest Holder

     • 9 years ago

     Hi its my first time using this service what do you mean seal entries?

     • 9 years ago
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  Spreado

  • 9 years ago

  Check #45 & #46 do you want any letters in arabic like (قطار العربية ) or any thing like that ? hamza or any arabic fonts ? feedback please

  • 9 years ago
  1. 
     Contest Holder

     • 9 years ago

     I would like the name in english . But I would like to see some letters in arabic maybe on train carriage ect. Or to form the word arabic train in english but look a little arabic.

     • 9 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 9 years ago

  Another idea is to have the letter A in arabic train to be in the shape of a train head on. So the letter A is the train image if you get what i mean

  • 9 years ago
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  BrainJR

  • 9 years ago

  do you want the text in Arabic or in English ? :3

  • 9 years ago
  1. 
     Contest Holder

     • 9 years ago

     I want the text in english but to have some arabic incorporated into it. like with dots or a hamzah (ء) in the logo. something along the lines of 31

     • 9 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 9 years ago

  Sorry i feel bad rejecting work. They are all very nice just not right for the project.

  • 9 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 9 years ago

  Another idea to make the arabic train seem more arabic rather than place a dot on the i you can place a "hamzah" "ء"

  • 9 years ago
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  Emanuella13

  • 9 years ago

  which is the correct arabic writing for "arabic train"?

  • 9 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 9 years ago

  is it possible to draw the train using arabic caligraphy. something similar to this . http://limeshot.com/images/blog/logos/horse.png I know this is a horse but if it can be made into a train and colourful

  • 9 years ago

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