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Sorry some typos repaired from previous one.

Sorry some typos repaired from previous one.

Contest Entry #14 for                                                 Donation Proposal for a start-up autism and special needs organization

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  • Chantel450
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    You can send it as is Charl. It has also been great working with you as well. i will keep you in mind for other projects. Thank you very much, Chantel

    • 11 years ago
  • Snap2Art
    Snap2Art
    • 11 years ago

    Very glad to have been of service. Will be a privilege to work with you again! My best wishes with your wonderful service! If in order, I will have to upload the original entry to you as handover (you do have the changes). If this is however a problem to you, please let me know and I will recreate if for you with the first edit. Best regards, Charl

    • 11 years ago
  • Chantel450
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    I will use your first option. Thanks. You have done nice work. I will be in need of your services again in the near future.

    • 11 years ago
  • Snap2Art
    Snap2Art
    • 11 years ago

    Not "a parents" just "parent's" (sorry)

    • 11 years ago
  • Snap2Art
    Snap2Art
    • 11 years ago

    End of 3d par.: It will help us to take a parents hands and guide them through the difficult times after the initial diagnoses and let them also land on safe solid ground.

    • 11 years ago
  • Chantel450
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    This is good however, can you try something else just so I can see what my options are? Thanks

    • 11 years ago
  • Snap2Art
    Snap2Art
    • 11 years ago

    If this does not fall right on the ear (and hart), please let me know and we can try something else.

    • 11 years ago
  • Snap2Art
    Snap2Art
    • 11 years ago

    Would then have to change the next sentence to: "We can only cater for their and their children's needs" as the "their" will now refer to the parents.

    • 11 years ago
  • Snap2Art
    Snap2Art
    • 11 years ago

    As the contest is closed I can not change my entry, but I will suggest inserting this sentence after the first sentence of the 3d paragraph (.....looks after our own autism and special needs communities."): "We take distraught parents by the hand, arm them with information and guide them to acceptance and contentment." Let me know if this will work for you or not (it does not specifically states on diagnoses, but it is implied).

    • 11 years ago
  • Snap2Art
    Snap2Art
    • 11 years ago

    Will do that gladly for you.

    • 11 years ago
  • Chantel450
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    Somewhere within your entry can you reference that we help new parents navigate The system when their child gets diagnosed.

    • 11 years ago
  • Snap2Art
    Snap2Art
    • 11 years ago

    Will gladly do Chantel, even after awarding the contest to me. I think we might miss each other when the contest closes, so please feel free to let me know your desired changes here in the mean time. I am going to be at work for 7 hours from the time I replied here and will make the changes for you as soon as I return. Regards. Charl

    • 11 years ago
  • Chantel450
    Contest Holder
    • 11 years ago

    Hello. I love your entry and I'll be awarding you but I was wondering if you could change a few things. Please let me know ASAP as this is time sensitive.

    • 11 years ago

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