I'd be glad to work on this project prepare for the proposal submission. Meanwhile there are some questions I'd like to get answers about: 1. Who is the donor and do they have any grant proposal application? 2. what specific changes do you expect for the proposal? I'd suggest more background research to get more evidence about existing needs assessment. The other parts also need improvement. + adding conflict and gender sensitivity issues are strongly recommended. I've got 10+ years of project management in the conflict affected areas. So will be glad to further consult you and work on this proposal. Please do not hesitate to contact me.