Graphic for clothing brand and music group: The Badge Hussars (BadgeHussars.com)

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  kalderon

  • 13 years ago

  chek #29 #32 #33 #34 #34 give feedback or rate please. Best regards.kalderon

  • 13 years ago
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  MDinesh87

  • 13 years ago

  sir pl chk #24
  Thank you

  • 13 years ago
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     MDinesh87

     • 13 years ago

     and #26

     • 13 years ago
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     MDinesh87

     • 13 years ago

     and #27

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  shri14

  • 13 years ago

  please check #12, #13 , #14, #15, #16, #17 and give feedback. thank you :)

  • 13 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 13 years ago

  Hi NiccroadNiccroad,
  We did think about a badge and feather(s). If we do go down this route, it would need to be simpler, using less embroidery stitches and less colours.

  • 13 years ago
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     niccroadniccroad

     • 13 years ago

     Hi, no problem. First attempt to see if I'm on the right track. I'll work some more on it and upload new variations.
     Regards,
     Nic

     • 13 years ago
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  Grozni

  • 13 years ago

  Will you give me feedback on my entry? I have other ideas if you don't like this. Thank you.

  • 13 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 13 years ago

     Hi Grozni.
     I think the text part of the design is interesting.
     I'm not sure what the white 'U' shaped part and the black 'sphere' are?? I don't think others will understand those symbols either. Please explain.

     • 13 years ago
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  shri14

  • 13 years ago

  hii ...please check #4,#5.....and give feedback....thank you....:)

  • 13 years ago
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     Contest Holder

     • 13 years ago

     Hi Shri.
     
     To be completely honest, I'm not keen on those for the following reasons:
     
     I don't like the font, the words look like Badgettussars.com to me, there's a lack of style, there's no 'logo'/graphic, the '.com' doesn't look good in the design and I don't like the words all on the same level.
     
     Sorry if that sounds negative, but it's our honest opinion.
     
     Thank you for your efforts.

     • 13 years ago
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     shri14

     • 13 years ago

     thanks for ur feedback, i will make da necessary changes......:)

     • 13 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 13 years ago

  Part 2: Specifically, there should not be a badger or a bottom (Arse) in the graphic.
  
  Also, for embroidering onto rugby shirts etc, the number of colours and intricacy of the design probably needs to be less so that small examples will work.
  
  Perhaps one or more of: the hat; a grey feather; and/or the gold tunic would work?
  
  Or a single colour (silouette of a) Hussar or Feather or ?
  
  ... or something totally different??
  
  Again. Thank you for your work.
  
  We have not ruled out the design (or a modified version of it).

  • 13 years ago
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     manikmoon

     • 13 years ago

     Thanks for the feedback, I was led up the garden path by the badgers arse bit, it aint something you hear much any more!

     • 13 years ago
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  Contest Holder

  • 13 years ago

  Part 1: Thank you ManikMoon for your entry.
  
  We appreciate your effort and the use of the Hussar.
  
  The design is growing on me as I type this, but wasn't what we were looking for because of the following:
  
  To clarify: We were expecting the graphic to *not* be 'crude' or visibly rude. It should be the opposite. It needs to look smart/slightly formal and be of a similar feel to existing brand logos. The joke (Badger's Arse) should take a little time to 'sink-in' when you see the graphic for the first time.

  • 13 years ago