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Golf Holidays Ad 2

Another entry for your Ad. Thank you

Contest Entry #10 for                                                 Poster/ Advertisement for Golf Holidays  - RUSH Deadline Sep.13

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  • etravelph
    Contest Holder
    • 10 years ago

    Mimi, please send the revised version incorporating my comments by this afternoon. Will award you the prize immediately after so you can begin process of uploading the file to me. I will need the file by 6 PM today.


    Thanks!

    • 10 years ago
  • etravelph
    Contest Holder
    • 10 years ago

    Hi Mimi! We like your ad entries, and are leaning towards entry #10 , but could you please do the following revisions:
    - Golf should be smaller, and just text, no need for the O golf ball. (Remember this magazine will be all golf ads, so no need to emphasize golf)
    - Philippines needs to pop-out more (We need to emphasize Philippines, i don't know how, maybe by making it bigger?, this is the Unique Selling Point of the ad more than the Golf)

    Please send your revised idea asap, as mentioned we are already overdue our deadline, and we really want to award you the prize asap. :)

    • 10 years ago