WINNER WILL HAVE EXTRA WORK AFTER - High Quality Label Packaging Design Required - Supplements

  • Status: Closed
  • Prize: $590
  • Entries Received: 115
  • Winner: dsgnlove

Contest Brief

Ecommerce supplements store that specialises in weight loss/dieting, health and vitality. We would like the designer to work on a new line this time around called Mango Lean, this is African Mango 6000mg - please see attached mock design (not professiona

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  • dsgnlove
    dsgnlove
    • 4 years ago

    It's posted already.

    • 4 years ago
  • slimbay
    Contest Holder
    • 4 years ago

    Hi, sorry for the late reply. How do I post the winning design?

    • 4 years ago
  • Drafix
    Drafix
    • 4 years ago

    Good designs dsgnlove and Lemur Catta, all the best for the future !!

    • 4 years ago
  • LemurCatta
    LemurCatta
    • 4 years ago

    Dear slimbay,

    we would be also really interested to see the winning design.

    Thank you.
    The LC Team

    • 4 years ago
  • Drafix
    Drafix
    • 4 years ago

    Once again Sir, I think we all have worked hard enough and deserve to see the winning design at least.I want to be sure that I have worked for a genuine contest.

    • 4 years ago
  • Drafix
    Drafix
    • 4 years ago

    Yea...can we ??

    • 4 years ago
  • vanillasky
    vanillasky
    • 4 years ago

    can we see winning design ? thank you

    • 4 years ago
  • dsgnlove
    dsgnlove
    • 4 years ago

    Thanks :)

    • 4 years ago
  • LemurCatta
    LemurCatta
    • 4 years ago

    Dear slimbay,

    please keep in mind that - as we are highly interested in a long-term cooperation - we can provide rearrangements of the details of our design according to your expectations.

    Sincerely yours
    The LC Team

    • 4 years ago
  • mariadesigns78
    mariadesigns78
    • 4 years ago

    Hi, please check Private Message (click on my username "mariadesigns78"). Thanks.

    • 4 years ago
  • LemurCatta
    LemurCatta
    • 4 years ago

    Dear slimbay,

    We hope you are going to like one of our new, more colorful designs.

    Sincerely yours
    LC

    • 4 years ago
  • F5DesignStudio
    F5DesignStudio
    • 4 years ago

    any changes you want on #133 ?

    • 4 years ago
  • Samadesign
    Samadesign
    • 4 years ago

    Great Project, unfortunately i didn't saw it in the last days. I will check your profile for future projects.

    Driss

    • 4 years ago
  • LemurCatta
    LemurCatta
    • 4 years ago

    Dear slimbay,

    We are very happy to join your contest and we are awaiting your opinion.
    In the case that you like #102 -105 please keep in mind that we can change and re-arrange the details according to your feedback and expectations.

    Sincerely yours
    The LC Team

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi,
      I like the design a lot as it looks very professional. Although I have worries about the amount of colour used as all of the colour is beyond the cut marks on the template. I know that you have added mock ups of the designs on the bottles but for me a little more colour is required. Very professional designs though, great work.

      • 4 years ago
    2. LemurCatta
      LemurCatta
      • 4 years ago

      Dear slimbay,

      Thank you very much for the feedback.
      The colors beyond the cut marks where just to visualize the idea - we were very careful not to use too much - as we understood from the earlier posts that you might be looking for something clean. We are working on new proposals to meet your requirements and we will present these within the next hours.

      your Lemur-Catta-Team

      • 4 years ago
  • moncho37
    moncho37
    • 4 years ago

    Hi What you think about #96 #98 #99 ?
    I will appreciate any feedback you have.

    • 4 years ago
    1. moncho37
      moncho37
      • 4 years ago

      Thanks for your input I will work on a more cleaner look
      Do you like to have a photo of the mango or you prefer something with out image?

      Have a great day

      • 4 years ago
    2. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      I will upload the photo a little later. I like the image but it doesn't have to dominate the design. Sometimes subtle is a good thing.

      • 4 years ago
  • F5DesignStudio
    F5DesignStudio
    • 4 years ago

    any feedback on #95 and #97 please

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi,
      The design looks a lot better now that you have pulled this into a smaller space. I like how it looks on the bottle too. Unfortunately this is not in my top 3 at the moment though as I have had a lot of other great designs come in. I just want to be honest with you. I do like your work though.

      • 4 years ago
    2. F5DesignStudio
      F5DesignStudio
      • 4 years ago

      Thanks. i`ll give another try today after work

      • 4 years ago
  • wik2kassa
    wik2kassa
    • 4 years ago

    Hi slimbay, can you provide feedback on #66?
    Thanks.

    • 4 years ago
    1. wik2kassa
      wik2kassa
      • 4 years ago

      Thanks alot for the feedback. I got carried away with changes on #66. I have uploaded a new design #101 I do hope you like it.
      Thanks.

      • 4 years ago
    2. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi,
      This one looks a lot cleaner, thank you. Having this on the bottle also really helps to visualize what the label will look like.

      • 4 years ago
  • PixelAngel
    PixelAngel
    • 4 years ago

    #112

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      please see comments above regarding #112

      • 4 years ago
  • PixelAngel
    PixelAngel
    • 4 years ago

    provide feedback on #112 n #113 please. thank you

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      #112 is better than #113 but I still don't like the gradient on there. Maybe a fresh looking block colour might look a little more modern? The bullet points are very basic as well, perhaps ticks or an abstract design for each point might look a little nicer.

      • 4 years ago
  • PixelAngel
    PixelAngel
    • 4 years ago

    need feedback for #114

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi,
      I am not sold on the gradient or the aggressive split between the orange/red and the white. The text looks difficult to read within the lighter parts of the gradient as well. Also, I do not like the way the 60x Capsules text has been presented, this is informational so should be a lot smaller.

      • 4 years ago
  • F5DesignStudio
    F5DesignStudio
    • 4 years ago

    #58 feedback please :)

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi,
      The design is very clean. I am not sure how this would look on the bottle though, is there any way that you could show this? The design section is very wide so it worries me that if it is sat upon a shelf there will be parts of the message or design that will wrap around the bottle and be lot from the customers vision.

      Things that I would like to see as an improvement are:
      A smaller design area so that the front facing part of the bottle will display all images and information.
      Bullet points under the logo, I would rather the bullet points were aligned left and the text went the other way.
      Font/Text is a little on the small side, this needs to be legible when the customer picks up the bottle as this is important information listed.

      I cannot knock the design itself though as it is very clean and looks really good. How would this inherit across to my other products though as this is meant to be a uniform design that can be used across my entire product range.

      • 4 years ago
    2. F5DesignStudio
      F5DesignStudio
      • 4 years ago

      expect my changes and new proposal soon, thank you!

      • 4 years ago
  • Drafix
    Drafix
    • 4 years ago

    Hello Sir,
    I have posted the updated designs as per your requirements. Hope you like it. Thank you !!

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi,
      Now we are talking. These designs look a lot better than the last ones. Far clearer, easy to read and the design elements blend in with onne another a lot more than they did. Thank you very much.

      • 4 years ago
  • wik2kassa
    wik2kassa
    • 4 years ago

    Hi slimbay,
    Thanks for rating my entry. Can you please provide private feedback so I can improve my design.
    Thanks again.

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi,
      I really like the design, it is very creative. I would like to see how this could be inherited across the rest of the product range though as I am not so sure the design will work so well as a uniform design. There are a points though:
      No QR code included on the design.
      Worried about the over hang on the orange graphic where the "60 capsules" text is.
      The alignment on the left and right of the main design looks a mess.
      Could do with a splash of colour in the heading Mango Lean, maybe have the "Lean" part in orange.
      I would like to see what the design looks like without shadowing as this seems to eat into the text area.

      Also, is there any way that you could display this label on a bottle as it is hard to visualize what it will look like on the packaging.

      I really like the design though.

      • 4 years ago
    2. wik2kassa
      wik2kassa
      • 4 years ago

      Thanks for taking the time to review. I will submit a revised design soon.

      • 4 years ago
  • Drafix
    Drafix
    • 4 years ago

    Hello Sir, i would like get a feedback on entry no. 43, 44, 45 and 46 so that i can improvise on them. Thank you !!

    • 4 years ago
    1. Drafix
      Drafix
      • 4 years ago

      I agree with you. I'll work on it and post the updated ones as soon as possible. Thank You !!

      • 4 years ago
    2. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Brilliant, thanks a lot.

      • 4 years ago
  • noelopan1955
    noelopan1955
    • 4 years ago

    Hi! May I know what part of #21 & #29 needs improvement. Please PM me. Thanks so much.

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi,
      I am really sorry but I just do not like the design. Here is what I don't like:
      The large capsules image
      The border style design - it has an Indian type styling about it
      The font is not very modern
      No barcode or space for barcode
      Position of the logo and the oval border around it
      I am really sorry to say it but it just is a long way from what I am looking for. The only part of it I really like is the gradient on the background and the image of the mango (which was supplied with the brief). Please do not continue along the same line as this will not fit in very well with my brand. It needs to be a lot more modern, modern fonts etc etc.

      • 4 years ago
  • Enka
    Enka
    • 4 years ago

    Hi!
    What is the shape and dimensions of the container these labels will be put on? Like, bottle etc.
    Sincerely,
    Enka

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi, I require a design for the mango.lean label but it needs to be a uniform design I can use throughout my product range, this also means that the design will need to look good on box packaging as well.

      • 4 years ago
    2. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      Hi, these are labels and will be put on white bottles. check out www.slimbay.co.uk and look at the cutback XT slimming pills.

      • 4 years ago
  • santarellid
    santarellid
    • 4 years ago

    please check #16 and #17 , thanks

    • 4 years ago
    1. slimbay
      Contest Holder
      • 4 years ago

      thank you

      • 4 years ago

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