How going raw can change your life
Here's a first draft. Let me know what you think of the tone and the content. If you like the writing, I could get started on the detox article. Thanks.
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Contest Holder - 12 years ago
Sounds good I just want to be 100 procent happy with the article thats the most important.
I think I going to hire you :) I like you :)
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MIchele- 12 years ago
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michelleolaya
- 12 years ago
Hi there, I revised my article to include the following under the How you can get started section :
Detox with raw foods. All that overindulging on our standard diet comes with a price. Years of built-up toxins can accumulate as a result of eating cooked and processed foods. A cleansing detox can be a good way to get you started on your physical transformation. Once your body is clean, you’ll feel much more motivated to take better care of it and to continue on this healthier path. You can learn more about the raw food detox by reading Getting Started with a Raw Food Cleanse. - This should link to my detox article.- 12 years ago
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michelleolaya
- 12 years ago
Thanks. I got my information from a lot of sources. Mostly stuff that ranked high on google searches. I found that mostly women were writing about their experiences.
Please feel free to send me your experience with raw food so I can incorporate it into the article.
Do you want the article to indicate the writer's gender at all? Do you want it to be from a male or female point of view?
I can put in the information about detoxing in the "How to get started" part and that can link to the detox article that Im going to write once the raw food article is perfect.- 12 years ago
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Contest Holder - 12 years ago
ello Again! I think you've done a good job, you got all the information from those pages I gave you or you atching it in several places?
I even thought to ask you if it is ok that I write a bit about my experiences with raw food and detox and send to you so you can read and write together in a good way, and inspiring, it is important you will want to start eating RAW FOOD and make DETOX directly when läsetr :)
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Michele- 12 years ago
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Contest Holder - 12 years ago
Hi I like it alot there are some changes here and there , I am en expert so i can see some stuff that is coming from people who dont know anything about Rawfood.
My question Is if I hire you can we change it until I am happy ?
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Michele- 12 years ago
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michelleolaya
- 12 years ago
This is definitely the first time I've ever looked into raw food, so my information might not have been sourced correctly. I'm happy to revise until we get it right. Aside from the links you included in the brief, will you be providing additional information/sources about raw food?
- 12 years ago
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michelleolaya
- 12 years ago
This is definitely the first time I've ever looked into raw food, so my information might not have been sourced correctly. I'm happy to revise until we get it right. Aside from the links you included in the brief, will you be providing additional information/sources about raw food?
- 12 years ago
