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Editing-Revising a "Personal Statement"

I need to edit the Personal Statement that I have already prepared. I need to make it more interesting for reader. You should CHANGE the whole FIRST PARAGRAPH ( make it shorter and interesting). All in all I want a CLEAR, PRECISE, STRAIGHT TO THE POINT, and of course attention getter 400-500 words final draft with correct grammar.

PLEASE only put your bid on this if you have done such a job (Personal Statement) before.

Skills: Editing, Proofreading, Research Writing

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( 7 reviews ) tampa, United States

Project ID: #5074697

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