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Dear freelancers,

I want to hire you for my ongoing projects. For that, I need you to demonstrate your skills by rephrasing the following few sentences I will write below, and make them sound more professional. Proofread this piece of work send it along with a bid (not more than 30 USD) and I will choose someone whose work is most accurate to work for my projects.

Please, don't send me your auto-biography and feedbacks. You would better proofread these following sentences, and that will show me if you are really that talented and if I need to cooperate with you.

Edit this paragraph (proofread, change the structure of sentences keep the idea, but change the sentences)

"There are many significant professional and academic accomplishments that I feel proud of, nevertheless, there are some achievements that are accomplished automatically, for example, if you study hard you eventually obtain for example BA or MA in some subject – of course, this is a significant achievement, but it is a logical conclusion. However, I feel more proud about the achievements that I worked really hard on, that I strived for and achievements that require not only one course of action (like only studying) but also other aspects such as overall potential, past valuable experiences, knowledge, etc. One of those achievements was when in 2012, I was selected as a finalist of the NNF program, which is really hard to get and which is given not only because of your very high academic results, but also overall achievements as a student compared to other potential students. In this regard, I consider it one of my biggest achievements. The other one is the fact that I authored the first Serbian-Hungarian Phrase Book, at such young age. Authoring a book is an enormous accomplishment that is worth being proud of. "

Skills: Article Rewriting, Copywriting, Editing, Proofreading, Research Writing

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Here is the sample you requested: "There are many significant accomplishments, both professional and academic, of which I feel proud. However, there are certain achievements which can be completed “automatically.” F More

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virtual7674

Hello, This is my version of the paragraph: "If you're disciplined enough, you may eventually earn a BA/MA degree in the topic of your choice - this is a well-deserved achievement, but an expected one; most peop More

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WEBCORPM

Hi, I may be a new freelancer, but I have plenty of writing experience. This is the sample you asked: "From my point of view, there are different types of professional and academic accomplishments. First of all More

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sherinelhakim

Hello: I'm very much interested in your project. I graduated from a faculty of languages, English department in 1992. I proofread your text. Here it is: "There are many significant professional and academic ac More

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kjones5491

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kprpillai

Dear customer, Please find the edited text quoted below: “I feel proud of all my academic and professional achievements. These include the ones that are accomplished with normal efforts, and the ones that entailed sp More

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