I started a kickstart project and already write a draft description. I need you to help me rewrite the description into a better version which fits kickstarter better.
I hope you can help me rewrite the description of the project and to make the reader feel more comfortable about the SmileNoodle. Another target is to let the reader feel more personal connection with me and know more about my design precess. I hope the description can be divide into several parts with their own title, such as 1. how it works; 2. what's next; 3. ........ and so on. Of course the more humor , the better. You should be familiar with kickstarter, and please take a look at the link below(you can find the draft description and the promo video there), and send me a outline of the description you planning to write with your application. I hope you can finish it ASAP.
here is the project preview link:
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thank you very much