sales letter rewrite

I am starting a new business online. I did a rough draft of my sales letter and put it onto? <[login to view URL]>? and I'm looking for someone who can rewrite it, to give more impact if possible? Size is not very important here. I want to get the main points across with different wording. The business is about a new way to make simple easy money from home. All you need to do is to give away two ebooks and everything else is done on autopilot for you. I give away two free ebooks which describe it in some detail and also cover what is needed to set up and run an online business of this type. The letter covers the main beneifits and the intention of the letter is to get readers to sign up to get the free ebooks with no obligation and also they will get further ebooks and software every week, for as long as is wanted. The following page wil be a simple opt-in page to collect first name, last name and email address, so I can send them a download email for the two ebooks. Only the sales letter needs to be rewritten here, the follow-on page is already done. ## Deliverables I used coloured boxes to separate out the different paragraphs. That could be altered if need be?