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Rewrite 75 Descriptions

I have 75 descriptions of 70 - 100 words each that need to be rewritten.

THIS CANNOT BE DONE BY AUTOMATED TOOLS OR SIMPLE THESAURUS WORD REPLACEMENTS.

Here is an example of what needs to be done:

Original Description-

Near hiking trails

This Radisson hotel is a mile from Northern Arizona University, the Lowell Observatory and downtown; the Walnut Canyon and Sunset Crater Volcano National Monuments are 15 miles away.

Pool, spa, sauna

Guests can enjoy a seasonal outdoor pool and spa tub, sauna, and fitness center. A lounge is on site, and dining options include an American restaurant and a Japanese restaurant and sushi bar.

Wireless Internet

Guestrooms at Radisson Woodlands Hotel feature complimentary wireless Internet, Sleep Number Beds, coffee/tea makers, and 37-inch flat-panel TVs with premium satellite channels.

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Rewritten Description-

Conveniently Located

Just a mile from downtown, the Radisson Hotel is close to major destinations in Flagstaff including the Lowell Observatory and Northern Arizona University and just 15 miles from Sunset Crater Volcano National Monuments and Walnut Canyon.

On Site Amenities

Stay fit and reduce stress by working out in the on-site fitness center. Then relax in the outdoor pool, spa, or sauna. When you are ready to eat, enjoy either a Japanese or American style restaurant just steps from your room.

Room Features

Excellently appointed rooms include comfy Sleep Number Beds, premium satellite channels on 37 inch flat screen TVs, free high speed wireless internet, and of course coffee and tea makers.

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Notice:

1. Paragraph headings are completely different.

2. Order of the paragraphs is different.

3. Sentence structure and order is different.

The above is what I expect. Again, simple word swapping is not acceptable. The essential information is the same but it has been thoughtfully rewritten.

For your bid to be considered you must rewrite the description in the attached file following the above format and guidelines.

I expect to pay $30 for this project and if it goes well, to post several more just like it.

Skills: Article Rewriting

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Project ID: #1255274

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WriteAround

My first language is English, and i have excellent writing skills. I may be a newbie, but i am willing to put in the time and effort for this project.

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megs22

hello, very interested in this job for you. if you would like i can send a sample if you provide the article. thanks for your time hope to hear back from you

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OliverSDaniel

Hi, I am sending you samples of my rewriting in my PMB. Regards, Oliver

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TextConstruct

Hello! In private message you will find the description sample. Thank you for considering me for this project!

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Fast12

check out the PM

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BLPSolutions

Hey. Hope u doing fine. Hope we can start working soon.

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misson2011

Please Check Your PM

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henrylukban

Following is my response to your test: Accessibility At the middle of Flagstaff, the NAU, Lowell Observatory and historic downtown are a leisure walk away from the hotel. Recreational conveniences A fitness fa More

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snowinception

Hi, I am interested with the job!

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Lesprite1

Please see the test text in the PMB and judge if I have understood your requirements.

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