Improve my paragraph

I have written a short paragraph about a charitable event. I want the event to be a challenge that women want to participate in the ice bucket challenge or the raise a flag challenge that they have for charity,. I don't feel that I have really motivated the reader to say: "I want to be a part of that challenge."

Skills: Article Writing, Content Writing, Editing, Proofreading

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