I have to write an article for a magazine, attached is the first draft. I am looking for someone to re-write this to make it more punchy, professional and reduce it to circa 400-500 lines. also take out the "me me me I I" references
I am a professional editor and content writer, and I can help you to re-write and make all the necessary adjustments to your article. I can do a good job for you. Please let's discuss this further.