I need someone to re-write or improve the e-mail outbound text below:
Hello [Prospect Name],
Since you are in the [Industry] business, I thought you might like to know that I am selling the domain name of [Domain] .
This domain can be forwarded to your existing site to capture some pre-qualified leads from people who type in the domains into their browser.
This domain should serve work to your advantage in the search engines and in Internet and offline marketing campaigns.
This is a very short term, first come first served opportunity. I am contacting other [Industry] businesses today about this rare opportunity.
This is very simple job and you only require to improve it with more attractive.
Please do not bid with your experience or copy pasted proposal
Bid your rate, your ideas to make it more creative, and this job suppose to be done within an hour.
17 freelancers are bidding on average $7/hour for this job
I have read your project description you need email template [login to view URL] do your work as per your requirement. .will deliver work [login to view URL] reply me for more details. Thanks and regards Anish
To start with, I would like to- a. Articulate a catchy subject line b. Highlight the exclusive features of the business c. Explain the uniqueness of the domain d. Introduce any loyalty offers, if possible