We have a brochure ready for print; however, the copy needs rewriting. There are 65 very unique furniture products and each one has a block of space that can accomodate from 50 to 200 words.
The current copy is written to emphasize the steak and not the sizzle. It needs to highlight the customer benefits instead of the materials used to produce the product. As a writer, you know what I am saying.
Attached is a sample of the current copy with notes regarding where it needs to be improved.
For your bid to be considered, we would like to see a sample of how you would rewrite this one piece.