Rewrite my App Store description

I have created a very simple mobile app for assessing basic math skills which is available on several app stores. For this project I would like the description to sound a little less “boring” - I wrote it so I can say that :-)

I would also like the recent updates merged into the description.

The app is for kids but is aimed at the parents/caregivers and teachers. For parents it provides a convenient (paper-less) way to assess/verify basic math progress at school without the need to hand-mark. And it is useful to slot in this activity between Angry Birds or Minecraft sessions ?

For teachers it could replace the equivalent paper-based assessment.

I require:

1) a “long” description (ie similar in length to the existing description but it can be longer)

2) a “short” description of around two or three sentences max

3) a list of three to five concise app features

App Store links:

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Existing Description:

Maths Basic Facts is a no-frills app for testing addition, subtraction, multiplication and division skills by presenting 100 questions in random order with a time limit.

Addition: 25 questions, up to 16 + 11.

Subtraction: 25 questions, up to 16 - 11

Multiplication: 25 questions, up to 10 × 10

Division: 25 questions, up to 100 ÷ 10

Up to three pre-set time limits can be specified and the names can be added for that personal touch.


A detailed "report card" screen which shows correct, incorrect and skipped totals by operator and visually highlights the best and worst result (in a child friendly way).

A simple self-test for up to four incorrect or skipped responses.

I am a first-time Freelancer user so apologies in advance for anything that is unclear.

I am expecting the winner to be able to "weave" the advantages to Parents and Teachers into the App Description.

Skills: Copywriting, Product Descriptions, SEO

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