I'm working on a short story which will be used as a voice over/animation combo on a youtube video.
It focus's on delivering some ideas of absurdism/existentialism/purpose in life as a digestible narrative.
So far it's about 4000 words but still a pretty rough draft
What I want is the prose improved, sections fleshed out, metaphors and symbolism added.
The overarching idea is similar to the myth of sisyphus by Albert Camus so you must be familar.
I would like the story to be poetic and inspiring.