I have a 2 page CV, but it needs improvement, yet still feels like I've written it, and its representative of me.
I've had a new CV done through a very highly rated provider on Fiverr, but it feels like it out of a text book for Marketing and E commerce content, lots of intellectual sounding phrases but very little in the way of individuality. I'm hoping I find someone whose writing and experience can improve this so that it will genuinely help me find the job I want.
This is the Opening profile for instance -
'An accomplished, results-oriented marketing and website professional with a demonstrable record of success in leveraging creative vision and strategic direction to deliver class-leading project management performance across E-commerce, event management, graphic design and advertising functions. A notable capacity for coordinating multiple targeted omni-channel marketing campaigns, with a focus on delivering class-leading solutions to a diverse B2C and B2B clientele, is underpinned by an aptitude for translating data into high-value customer engagement. Keen communication and interpersonal skills facilitate strong collaborative stakeholder relationships, promote a leadership environment that is conducive to motivation, target-achievement and professional excellence. '
Not terrible of course, well written, just feel very generic. Can you help please?