Please rewrite the attached paper. It needs to have strong thesis, coherent arguments, clear logic, good thinking, and further exploration of the larger picture of the Antigone. (I am aiming for an A for AP English class) thanks!
here is the detailed requirement of a seminar paper:
The seminar paper enables students to discover, analyze, interpret, and formulate in writing the ideas they discover in a text. It involves a study of how the form of the text shapes its meaning. By means of close analysis of the text through a seminar paper, students are able to identify and delve more deeply into various meanings, nuances, and strategies the text states or implies.
~It is one typed page, single-spaced, 12 pt Times New Roman; it should have a title.
~It focuses on one aspect&amp;acirc;&acirc;‚&not;&acirc;€or one literary device or tool&amp;acirc;&acirc;‚&not;&acirc;€of the text, analyzing and interpreting it to arrive at a statement of meaning of the text as a whole. It helps the reader see how this one aspect shapes or contributes to meaning.
~It uses specific evidence, correctly cited, in regard to that aspect/device.
~It leads with a thesis statement (a formal introduction is not part of this paper); the thesis statement identifies the literary aspect/device.
~The thesis statement indicates the significance of the aspect/device (it indicates thematic significance).
Possible approaches to writing the seminar paper:
~Analysis of a motif (pattern of images, words, ideas)
~Analysis of a passage
~Analysis of one dominant metaphor
~Analysis of one scene
~Analysis of one character