Service requested: to improve readability (sentences just right and flow well) to remedial work on clarity, disorganized passages, and baggy prose of my novel. Essentially. tightening the English and polishing the manuscript for publishing.
This literary novel is the story of a brahmin boy in Calcutta who is thrown out of his family because he falls in love with a lower caste college friend. But he marries her, and they immigrate to the U.S. determined to forget his family and not to bring any trace of his conservative family. But he deeply suffers from the rejection by his father, and the pain becomes intense in retirement when he tells stories of his youth to grandchildren and learns how his sister’s life was also ruined by his father. Night Jasmine Tree (Shiuli tree in Bengali) is prominent in the novel as several events happen near such a tree. The novel centers on the protagonist’s mental anguish and how he was finally able to forgive his long dead father and reconcile with his family.