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editing an essay

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I want help in editing my essay and making it look better. Am posting the intro and a quote that I want in it. If anyone can do a good job with it we can move forward.

As a twelve year old school girl, I was frequently reminded by my mother to feel grateful that I was “privileged”. She always identified this privilege as a matter of contrast: I was not like the people knocking on car windows for change at traffic stops, or like the children barely clothed and sitting hungry by roadsides. The implication was that had it not been for my good fortune, I could have easily been one of “them”. Indeed I felt fortunate, but also equally uneasy about “them” - those whose hardships I could not escape in my imagination. As a young child I passively accepted this reality, even though I always wondered why such blatant disparities existed in the first place between their world and mine.

This is the quote i want as an opening but showed be put in an interesting way. "The single story creates stereotypes, and the problem with stereotypes is not that they are untrue, but that they are incomplete. They make one story become the only story.” (Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie )”

Skills: Editing

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MaryAnnEvans

Hello Gola85, My bid and deadline are just estimates, as I'm unsure of the length of your text. If you'd like to provide further information on approx. word length, I'll be happy to adjust my bid accordingly. Please se More

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Hi! I'm a published author and can make this really special. How many words is this essay? How many pages?

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garsong

Hi Gola 85, I am attaching a word doc with the intro stuff edited etc. I am a professional writing and editing graduate and love doing the kind of work you are looking for. My quote is for two hours work, as I More

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Chuckscaf

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This bid is for an essay up to 2000 words. Please provide a word count to adjust the bid; if it is more or less. Thanks. I hold a Ph.D. and have written many papers and articles.

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moed

Hi, gola85 I am proficient in English, both verbal and written. I have done essays & articles. I would like to take on your task. Please view my PM for more details. Regards moed

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