Need editing for a query for young adult fiction novel

Hello Freelancers,

I have a short, one page, 430 word query that has been edited already. However, I am looking for a second opinion by someone who has not read the book and who can make possible suggestions how to improve it.

This is a science fantasy book query for young adult.

If you are interested, make sure that you can answer the following questions with yes. And if you can, please give me some examples of your previous experience.

1. Have you written anything for the CHILDREN'S book industry before?

2. Are you a native American/Canadian/Australian/British speaker? (Please no writers from Pakistan, India, or Bangladesh. British and Australian should be familiar with US English.)

3. Have you written fiction book queries before?

Attached you can check out the query as pdf.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Best regards,


Skills: Book Writing, Editing, English (US)

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