My name is Aanya and I'm applying for undergraduate studies in LSE and the other UK universities. One of the requirements of UCAS is to write a personal statement (600-700 words) which reflects your interests etc.
I have written my personal statement and got it reviewed by a friend who was kind enough to give her remarks. She has also shared her PS which was accepted by many universities in UK. I want somebody to review my personal statement (alongwith her remarks) alongside her personal statement and come up with something very good.