My company is about to start a Kickstarter Campaign. [url removed, login to view] You can view it there. The problem is, we feel as though the Kickstarter does not entice people to back money to our project. I would like someone to rewrite the page, preferably someone who knows about the videogame industry. You must know what will entice people to back our project. Seeing as we need a substantial amount of money, we really need someone who knows how to make this game sound amazing and revolutionary, worth the money. We are also possibly looking for someone to write our Game Design document if the game is funded and, if we like you, we may ask you to take that position.