I have a newly started website called [login to view URL], where I research and share great lifetime deals on apps, software, graphis, memberships and products.
I think the text on the main page is a bit boring, so I want you to make it snappier, and actually I want to have it in rhyme!
PS! I do not want the text to be longer though. Think Hemingway writing rhymes Appsumo style. Or something :-)