Looking for someone to proof-read & edit (with notes), as well as constructive criticism of a work of fiction that's going to be published soon. Criticism or suggestions include for Flow, Character development, general storyline observances, etc
The manuscript was originally editing for a web content / web storyline, and as it's currently being ported into book format, we'd want it formatted accordingly, so knowledge of formatting for printed novels is a must.
The book is 117 pages, about 53,000 words, I'll send it to you in MS Word format, as you make changes to the manuscript with your suggestions, mark your recommendations so I can track them later for inclusion (or not).
The book is fantasy/mystic theme, currently published online, but we're looking at making a Revised Edition for Printed publishing.