Rewrite my CV

I am after getting my CV updated and looking professional. I have been told it is too resume like.

I have been advised the below would help. I would much rather I pay an individual to do this instead of a company.

These are the notes from the company

The term curriculum vitae roughly translates to the "story of your career", I am struggling to see fluidity within your CV or to truly understand what you have done and where you are going?

. You could benefit from a cleaner and more professional layout that will work with the ATS systems

. The CV structure is visually uneven which does not suggest 'high potential'

. Your CV at the moment just isn't built for the UK market, it is certainly more of a Resume than a CV

. Your objective needs to be clear, what types of roles are you targeting? I know what you have done previously but what are you looking to do next?

. You could do with a stronger opening profile (1 paragraph) that includes your key skills and what you have done throughout your career

. Your CV needs to include more key words for the ATS systems

. You need more key skills that are transferrable and professional within a key skill section and throughout the CV

. I would recommend to include more facts and figures to further quantify your achievements where possible

. There are a number of grammatical errors within your CV that need correcting

. I would not advise that you utilise 1st person tense on the CV as it can come across as repetitive and unprofessional

. Your CV doesn't show up well on a smartphone or tablet

. The current wording is more tasked based rather than results based, this comes across as a doer rather than an achiever

. Your experience needs expanding upon and needs to sell you further, what did you do and what did that achieve?

You have such fantastic experience, your CV needs to sell your skills and experience more.

Skills: Resumes, Editing, Copywriting, Ghostwriting

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