I cannot chat direct with you... But this was the comment I was trying to put:
Hi there Robert! Well, I must say that I do like your logo #23 and #26 (especially 23), which is a good thing. It's clean and the colors are good, and the basic idea is not bad at all. Only it's still very young in the design, and it looks like you pasted some loose graphics together. Is it possible for you to make something like this to look more like a whole, as if it was one piece. Sort of like from the free hand? I hope so. Greetings, Guy
but for some reason it's not passing, as I get the message Invalid comment: Please remove unsuitable info and try agai.