Proofread Something
- Status: Closed
- Prize: $15
- Entries Received: 15
- Winner: blarkins
Contest Brief
I need to REWRITE it into a professional marketing pitch. So it will sound cool and fun. This is the text for a video voiceover, less than one page (382 words).
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“I am very pleased to have met Barbi! Will definitely ask her for further cooperation. Great professional and amazing personality. ”
socialsuza, United Arab Emirates.
Public Clarification Board
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brinvj
- 7 years ago
Hi! i have made it more concise, I can modify it some more if you want. I thought it would be more readable this way.
- 7 years ago
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patriciavhdez
- 7 years ago
It seems well written :)
- 7 years ago
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vw7605760vw
- 7 years ago
But what if I rewrite the article with taking some time and you award prize to others. I need sir time till tommorrow evening to rewrite it. If you can sir I welcome you or else happy to talk to you. Choice is yours. Check my feedbacks if this doesnt agree you.
- 7 years ago
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reneringuet
- 7 years ago
Personally, I feel your copy was quite well written. It follows fairly natural speech patterns so it should come across well in a video. My changes were aimed at improving the flow whilst maintaining your message.
- 7 years ago
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